Sick of email copy that feels like a used car pitch? So is your audience.
The truth is, you can write emails that drive clicks and sales—without being pushy or salesy. The key is to shift from “sales mode” to “helpful guide mode.”
In this post, you'll get real-world email copywriting examples that sound natural, build trust, and still move readers toward action.
1. The Story-Based Email
Use a quick story to create a relatable moment, then transition to your offer.
Subject: “What my barista taught me about marketing”
Body:
I was at my local coffee shop when I overheard a barista explaining why their new espresso blend had no bitterness.
She didn’t hype it up. She just told a story—and that’s when I realized: that’s exactly what most emails are missing.
If you’re tired of writing pitchy emails, I made a free email sequence template for you to try:
👉 [Download it here]
Why it works: Relatable, engaging, lightly transitions into value.
2. The “Here’s What’s Working” Email
Position yourself as helpful and transparent. Teach while promoting.
Subject: “The email that got 42% open rate last week”
Body:
We tested 3 subject lines last week, and this one crushed the others.
👉 “Still sending emails like it’s 2015?”
Why it worked: It challenged a belief and hinted at a better way.
I dropped the full breakdown (plus the swipe file) into a Google Doc for you. Grab it here:
👉 [Get the swipe file]
Why it works: Shares insight → builds authority → provides useful asset.
3. The Personal Confession Format
Be vulnerable or self-aware—human copy converts.
Subject: “I almost didn’t send this email”
Body:
This isn’t the email I planned to send.
Originally, I had a product promo queued up. But then I realized…
What you might actually need is clarity—not another thing to buy.
So I made a cheat sheet for writing clearer emails (the kind that get replies). It’s yours if you want it.
👉 [Grab the cheat sheet]
Why it works: Builds trust and emotional resonance.
4. The Problem–Agitate–Solution Format
Classic copywriting structure. Address the pain point, make it feel real, then offer a fix.
Subject: “Why your welcome emails get ignored”
Body:
You spend time writing your welcome emails. But if no one’s clicking… what’s the point?
The problem? Most welcome sequences talk at the reader, not to them.
Let me help: I made a 5-email welcome template you can plug in today.
👉 [Get the full sequence]
Why it works: Relatable, structured, offers value fast.
5. The “Micro-Lesson + CTA” Format
Give a useful tip in under 100 words, then point them toward a resource or offer.
Subject: “Want more clicks? Use this sentence.”
Body:
Most emails end with a weak call to action. Try this instead:
“Want to see how it works—without scheduling a call?”
That one tweak increased our CTR by 28%.
Want 24 more like this?
👉 [Download the CTA swipe file]
Why it works: Short, value-packed, CTA is framed as a continuation of the value.
● Write like you’re emailing one person
● Keep sentences short and punchy
● Focus on solving a problem, not pushing a product
● Use curiosity and storytelling over hype
● Always deliver value—even if the reader doesn’t buy (yet)
LeadScripts helps you write engaging, human-sounding emails using proven templates and customer-focused frameworks.
You get:
● Story-based emails
● Value-first promos
● Welcome sequences
● Sales follow-ups
● CTAs and subject lines that feel personal—not pushy
You don’t need to be a copywriter—or a “salesy” marketer—to write emails that drive action.
Just focus on being helpful, human, and clear. Use these email copywriting examples as your swipe file—and when you’re ready to scale your email strategy the smart way…
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